Haiku 2

Haiku 2

A Poem by JR
"

another haiku

"

Can we really see

 

Or do we just pretend to

 

Open up our eyes?

© 2008 JR


Author's Note

JR
go ahead....be as brutal as you want :)

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I'm not looking. Nope, not looking at all. :) Good haiku. Excellent thought.

Posted 16 Years Ago


How true. Much of what we see is false or is tainted with falsehood. Especially politics. I think some things are too hidden for us to see. And some things we are not ready in our hearts to see. And some times we are just to a sleep to see. Thanks for the insightful question.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Why brutal? Poetry is read with joy , and this is an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago



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