Haiku 2
A Poem by
JR
another haiku
Can we really see
Or do we just pretend to
Open up our eyes?
© 2008 JR
Author's Note
go ahead....be as brutal as you want :)
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I'm not looking. Nope, not looking at all. :) Good haiku. Excellent thought.
Posted 16 Years Ago
How true. Much of what we see is false or is tainted with falsehood. Especially politics. I think some things are too hidden for us to see. And some things we are not ready in our hearts to see. And some times we are just to a sleep to see. Thanks for the insightful question.
Posted 16 Years Ago
How true. Much of what we see is false or is tainted with falsehood. Especially politics. I think some things are too hidden for us to see. And some things we are not ready in our hearts to see. And some times we are just to a sleep to see. Thanks for the insightful question.
Why brutal? Poetry is read with joy , and this is an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing
Posted 16 Years Ago
Why brutal? Poetry is read with joy , and this is an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing
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Added on May 21, 2008
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