Never Commit Suicide

Life will get us down at time but when it does get your boxing gloves and get ready to rumble. Keep believing in yourself, keep the faith and all will turn out well.

In Life You May Have Thoughts That Are Not Normal, Because Life Can Make You Feel Like You're Going Mental, Life Can Make You Become Suicidal,
But When You're Feeling Depressed Read Your Bible, And Let Jesus Christ Be Your Idol, Because He Is The Best Role Model,
Life Is Like An Examination So Everyone Will Be Tested,
And At Times To You, Life Can Be Somewhat Wicked,
They Say Life Is A Gamble,
For Some A Struggle,
So Get Your Boxing Gloves And Get Ready To Rumble, And Never Give Up The Battle.

Reviews

[Eve]

I like the idea of the poem a lot. The message it portrays is one a lot of people need. However when you rhyme in a poem it lightens the atmosphere, and your audience doesn't take it as seriously. It runs very smoothly, but I wouldn't have made it rhyme, choose carefully, you know? With that said, I really like the very last bit "And Never Give Up The Battle." It's the perfect way to end something like this, it restates your original idea, making it clear to your readers. It also sends your reader away with this idea of hope and inspiration, which I can really tell is what you wanted. Thank you for such an optimistic and positive outlook on life just in general. We don't get much of that anymore.