Pictures

of me

I feel bad for sending him those pictures

instead of being where I start to

sift my life, with

 

the crows, the motels, the misty forest morning,

and a cup of black coffee.

 

 

                            

                                     Forgive me?

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully done.

[Jennifer Gabriel]

i like the structure of your writing.
its refreshing - its rhyme-less. mature and beautiful...
^^

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i really liked this. very spare on elaboration, but it gives puzzle pieces that the reader can piece together. i'm sure it makes perfect sense to the person it was written to/about. for the rest of us it's an intriguing unfinished picture.