Why did you ignore me

My true fears and pain

When I told you that I like you more then a best friend
You left me hanging their
2 weeks passed since that day and I still have these burning feelings for you
I want to grab you by the shoulders and tell you how it feels to be ignored by you but what good will that do?
Your interest are elsewhere, from away from me
You probably don't know how fast my heart used to stop when you called me
Or how my stomach would feel with butterflies bursting for freedom
Or how I smiled so genuinely my dimples would show when I seen you
Now I just get tear stained pillow case's
And empty dreams that torture me
How can you ignore this pain you created?

Reviews

[Gabriel]

I think you still have to grow and if you keep writing, you will!
There are some mistakes that you could correct such as:
1) 1st line - it's than, not then
2) their - it's there
3) i'd replace the will on "what good will that do?" with WOULD
4) "Your interest IS (not ARE) elsewhere)
5) pillow cases without apostrophe

sorry about being honest with you, but you have a good poem here, and you can create better ones! Believe me, I wasn't not as good as I am now!

[Madhavi]

Loved the poem. I can feel understand the pain behind feeling ignored by someone whom you are very close to. Be brave and carry on your good work.

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For me is not really poem but more like personal note . Words don't flow so well. But there is lot of honesty and feeling of young brave heart. Personally i feel this like strong piece