This is my first piece that isn't poetry AND this is my first book. So feel free to criticize, but please do so in a constructive manner, anything otherwise is just unnecessary.
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Mr. S. It's really good. It's a great set up and it pulls me in wanting to know more. I got a good idea of space without it being an overbearing description. I'm not in a place where I can write much. I'll check back. Thanks for posting. John aka DogBreath
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Why thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm really itching to get the next chapter out and .. read moreWhy thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm really itching to get the next chapter out and I was just waiting to see how people felt about this first chapter, so again, thank you sooo much!
9 Years Ago
De nada. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Mr. S. It's really good. It's a great set up and it pulls me in wanting to know more. I got a good idea of space without it being an overbearing description. I'm not in a place where I can write much. I'll check back. Thanks for posting. John aka DogBreath
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Why thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm really itching to get the next chapter out and .. read moreWhy thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm really itching to get the next chapter out and I was just waiting to see how people felt about this first chapter, so again, thank you sooo much!
9 Years Ago
De nada. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!