starry night

one starry night, I'm alone
reminiscing my memories before.
I do watch the stars so long
finding my home where I belong.

I belong in here,
I belong in there
like a star...
I do fade away.

I close my eyes for a while
my heart feels the warmth of your arm
in the coldness of the night, however
you made me smile.

"you're my star"
love me not.
save and wake me up tomorrow,
to live my life with you...

Reviews

[mhaie]

Seemingly in love? Anyways, if that person is really meant for you, you belong together. hehe

[Jess]

how sweeeeeeet;'))
full of emotions and imagery....keep it up! i really loved tha last stanza.

[chuna]

thank you again...

[Michael X]

heartfelt and romantic, the sense of torn adoration is captured in an emotional imagery depicting the sky without an ending, lovely job, thanks for sharing!

[chuna]

thank you for reviewing!!
I never thought my piece will be a good one..
I'm glad that you like it,,,