DO YOU FEEL...

                                  Do You Feel...

  

   ALONE...

   counting every black ant passing by

   listening to your favorite radio station

   closing your eyes to find peace of mind

   or sight seeing even you do not 

   know where and what to find

   BREAK...

   picking up the pieces of your heart,mixed

   one by one turning them into ash

   bandaging fitly your bleeding heart

   until it came out as stone or rock

   then,lying in the grass without any hesitation

   IT'S OVER...

   that you cannot find your soul

   the dead body of yours goes on with the flow

   an infinite number of solutions is in your mind

   knowing not where to start and the one 

   because i cannot distinguish your love way

   HURT...

   that's what i feel today

   breaking my heart little by little

   please share me your feelings too

   for me to understand

   the different feelings of man

Author's Note

say what you want to say bout my poem,,,
even the grammar,,,

Reviews

[Larrycall]

amazing i like the feel of it 100!

[chuna]

thank you for reviewing!

[Jess]

woah:)very emotional poem>>> i felt all that you've written...because like you,i am human....LOL:)thanks for sharing your piece!!!

[chuna]

oh! thank you for reviewing!
hope you like my work!


how many points you had gained?


lol!

[Jess]

hundred and above!!!!hahaha

[chuna]

WALEY!

[I AM]

That was a really great piece.

"please share me your feelings too
for me to understand
the different feelings of man."

I believe that ending to be very powerful.

Well done.

[chuna]

thank you so much for that,,,
i really appreciate your message,,,:D

[bryandc15]

wonderful poem ....

[chuna]

weehh?

[bryandc15]

di wag.....:p

[chuna]

okay,,,don't be angry,,,, your heart!

[bryandc15]

haha....