*b'coz it's true #1

Human is not an island

Or should I say, no man can't be an island

Why? Because they need someone to point to their mistakes 

and someone to blame when things go WRONG and S**T

simp

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed!

[SimpleMind]

:D

[Mike Emil]

yeah---HAI!!!
damn the torpedoes!!!

[SimpleMind]

thumbs up!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha I love the last line..."...when things go wrong and s**t".

An interesting idea and concept. Human is certainly not a island...to be human we must deal with all of those little things that make us mortal and defeatable. But this is also what makes us beautiful.

Technical issues:
"Why? Because they need someone to point (to) for their mistakes" -- or it would be better to replace "point" with "blame" so that it is "....someone to blame for their mistakes". But that means you would need another word for "blame" in the last line. Either way, it's just a little grammatically off.

[SimpleMind]

and this is something no normal human will admit X)

hehe and thanks for the techies Fri!! I changed the first, but I couldn't think of a word for the second one so i guess i'll just leave it that way

[Sami Khalil]

Good poem to ponder . Thought provoking ...:)

[SimpleMind]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)