A Deep Love

Love doesn't always have to be around to show it exist

My love

I am away

Sorry for not protecting you

The way I should do

Sorry if I'm weak

There are things I cannot take

Sorry for running away

For not being there when you need me

No... don't cry

Please show me your smile

There.. that's it

You look perfect!

My little one

I will be gone

I don't know where

But it's far from here

Don't look for me

Don't bring me back

Grow up and live

Stand on your own feet

My dear child

I love you

I LOVE YOU

I always do

But I have to leave you

Simp

Author's Note

For those mothers who left their angels...for reasons only them knew...have a good read.

Reviews

[Akashi]

I think this is my favorite poem of yours.

[Krista Weiss]

So sad!! Really great job!!

[SimpleMind]

Thanks Kristy :D

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

So beautiful... Love is one of the most enduring qualities that we as the human species possess. Our ability to love and be loved is what sets us apart from so many other creatures on the planet. This write was so well thought out, and sounded so beautiful to the ears. Well done, my friend.

[SimpleMind]

Thanks a lot Sarah :)

[Mike Emil]

you too have promise
potential to show me up
wanna see you writ me outta the room
maybe you too can be instructed in kolrabi theater

[SimpleMind]

kolrabi theater?

[Mike Emil]

an invention of mine
HAI!!!

[SimpleMind]

hahaha i should have known >.

[Stella Armour]

i am almost in tears here, no mother would leave her child without it being in the child's best interest i am sure.This really has touched my emotions and my heart goes out to all mothers who have to for whatever reason leave their angel

[SimpleMind]

and my heart for those angels like me :)

thanks for the heartwarming review :)

[kublakhan27]

It's gorgeous, and it's in my library. A special piece for sure.

[SimpleMind]

aww~ Thanks a lot!!

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure :)

[Rhianne Ney]

I love this poem and how you lovingly expressed this for all of us to feel the grievance of a mother who leaves her little angel, I wonder why, and how she can do that... My mind's screaming abortion, but not sure. So, anyways, nice one~!

[SimpleMind]

It's more like those mothers leaving their child in orphanage or with other people...
I was thinking that society usually label them as irresponsible women and many others..but there must be more than that that even them cannot explain. Well, this is world anyway. Thanks a lot for the honest review :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah, that's right, I feel bad for them but yeah, some have their own reasons

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah, that's right, I feel bad for them but yeah, some have their own reasons

[Frieda P]

You own my tears right now, this was touching and moved me more than you could ever imagine.

[SimpleMind]

I hope this moved you in a positive way Frie. Thanks a lot :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure SM, it made me thing of a friend of mine who's been looking for her mother for ages, much enjoyed. :-)

[Kyle Sky]

Beautiful. this poem expressed greatly a mood of gentle motherly care. Although this was not very creative as a poem itself, it's very attractive in its essence. Truly this has a great verse, presentation and dedication in it.

[SimpleMind]

Thanks.. and yes, I prefer it this way.. simple. hehe