S**t happens

I was on the edge of losing...when it suddenly happened

I was crying

My tears falling

I was hurt badly

I was shattered emotionally

Someone just told me

How horrible my life can be

That I am so awful

That my life's miserable

That I am just pretending

That everything's my defense mechanism

I became so weak and defenseless

My sanity suddenly left my senses

I was on the brink of breaking down

I was about to take the loser's crown

When I suddenly looked at my self in the mirror

And realized in horror

F**k!! I am damn PRETTY!

Now I know why they want to hurt me

~

Simp

Author's Note

Shit happens, especially with the people nowadays.


P.S.
I don't know who invented or discovered the mirror,.. but whoever you are, I owe you a lot! Thanks for making the mirror happen! And also thanks for my friend who left her mirror in my crib.. it did save my day :3

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good title and I like the ending. We must pick our self up and don't allow the small things to slow us down. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SimpleMind]

I'll remember that.. thanks a lot!!

[JulieMorgan]

Your title caught my attention at first but your words drew me in...great read! And yes, s**t happens.

[SimpleMind]

Yes it did :)
Thanks..

[Weasley]

wow. that's amazing.

[SimpleMind]

Thanks :)

[Invisible]

I've noticed that. girls who are jealous of other girls looks seem to like mocking those girls, whether to their face or to other people. don't know why, and I don't know if guys do it as much or how, I think guys typically just try to beat the s**t out of guys they think are better looking, but I can't prove it, as it's a research project i'd both fail at and get bored of quickly. and yes you are pretty, just don't get any ideas ;)

[SimpleMind]

Hahaha I know where you're coming from, I won't..really. And well, it's the insecurities.. people are just like that. It's nuts.. but it's real. Thanks for dropping Oldy

[Invisible]

yeah, people suck. that one song says "people are people so why should it be, that you and I should get along so awfully?" but isn't that just the way people are? stabbing each other in the back, getting along for the sake of getting along, this I think is the general truth of the ways of humans, we can't seem to decide whether we really need people in our lives, or if we want to just make them go away.

[SimpleMind]

yeah... for the sake of being human we have to deal and be one of the people. Haha and they'll never go away... I guess I'll just enjoy whatever comes my way.

[Invisible]

no they won't, and the worse they are, the sturdier they are it seems. like a lewis black quote "the good die young, but pricks live forever". I try to enjoy things, but it's never easy in my case, i'm too realistic, others say negative.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fantastic realisation of inner strenght and guided words, well done, good read.

[SimpleMind]

Inner strength.. yes, that's the key word! Thanks Thom!

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Great job!!

[SimpleMind]

hehehe thanks a lot!

[Keith LaFountaine]

This is something quite a number of people can relate to, and it's excellently written. Filled with emotion and an undercurrent of anger and anxiety. Excellent work.

[SimpleMind]

Thanks Kei.. yes, I also love reading this one. It boosts me in some way. And anxiety,.. it's one of the worst! Really!

[Rhianne Ney]

(: Great poem, you're beautiful, unique and well-loved by everybody. Yeah, thank you mirror for showing her the reflection

[SimpleMind]

Haha we all are beautiful.. some in exotic way though ahahaa the kind like you rarely see in a crowd. It's all worth it, I mean.. self-love. Thanks Ney.. thanks a lot!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Renée]

lol I needed that

[SimpleMind]

I can lend you some mirror :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

haha...I like this one. I mean, I don't mean to put down the feelings of sorrow, but the ending is just a slap in the face (in a really good way). Nicely done.

[SimpleMind]

Well, I didn't expect it myself for something like this to happen. But well, it worked. Thanks for being around Fri :)