To Society

The society is like a rat race. Even if you win, you're still a rat.

This society is so fucked up

And it’s mocking me hard

Calling me a useless tramp

Throwing me in sinner’s camp

 

Mother of all b*****s!

I am judged and condemned by sinners

Referring to my braveness as cowardice

And being humble as shameless

 

Oh this rotten society

Will be amazed if you shot a bird in the sky

And make money from it

By selling the poor winged thing in the market

But will call you retarded if you will not do it

 

To you, goddamn society

You will see one day

With one wing, I will fly away

Author's Note

Stinking society

Reviews

[Akashi]

Hee hee..... yahhhh......

[SimpleMind]

Teehee!

[Rhianne Ney]

Sometimes we hate society that we often lock ourselves up yet sometimes we can't separate ourselves from them

[SimpleMind]

Yes I remember that.. hating people but having no choice to be with them.. XD Thanks Ney

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Invisible]

I remember feeling this way, then I gave up on caring lol

[SimpleMind]

Cool~ how exactly did you do that?

[Invisible]

it takes time and practice, and gin. just kidding, I don't touch the devil's nectar. but yeah, it wasn't easy, but eventually you grow tired of caring about all the people around you and what they're doing or what they think. granted I still care when I need to in large enough portions, but overall I gotta look out for me before I can look out for others.

[SimpleMind]

Amen to that. I'm like that too.. but I was just caught this time. hahaha

[Invisible]

maybe, or maybe we're both lying to protect ourselves, cause if others read this and believe us, then maybe we can convince ourselves it's true as well, right? XD

[SimpleMind]

Haha I'm free to believe whatever I want..right?

[Invisible]

that's my philosophy anyways.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Judgement is perhaps the worst part of the human psyche. The thing you have to remember is that judgemental people are usually just scared people...they don't understand what they don't understand and thus they default to judgement. At least that is what I try to keep in my head when I feel as though I'm being judged.

[SimpleMind]

Haha I see your point, some people are just too disappointed that they resort to judgment to uplift themselves... I just hate they way these kind of people make me sick. Thanks again Fri :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the words. Hard to understand this world. It seem we cannot win.
"Mother of all b*****s!
I am judged and condemned by sinners"
I learn a long time ago. You must try to make yourself happy and try and live a good life. Naysayers are many. Better to smile and leave the negative folks in the dust. Thank you for sharing a excellent poem.
Coyote

[SimpleMind]

Yes, I'm taking that lessons too for now. Naysayers.. I wonder where these people came from XD

Thanks a lot

[Keith LaFountaine]

I think at one point or another we all lose faith in society. You have some awesome things to say here, and you say them with such emotion it makes your words all the more powerful. Maybe one day we can believe in society again, but for now I'm with you.

[SimpleMind]

Amen to that.. well, someday maybe.. though I still wonder if a day like that will ever happen. Society's going wild and is unstoppable... Thanks for the honest review Kei

[Mike Emil]

society is rotten to the core
embrace it and all it's darkness
drink some brandy
smoke a cigar
and take your fill or all you can get for the taking

[SimpleMind]

That's a good suggestion.. thanks Em, as always :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simply - Bravo!

[SimpleMind]

Thanks :)

[Shannen Forrester]

Brilliant poem, and sadly you are right. But keep smiling and things will get better :)

[SimpleMind]

Oh yes Shazza, and smiling is the greatest revenge after all :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I agree, but create a realm where you can be the queen and the person in command. Sometimes when we can't beat them. it is better to build a new bastion to defeat them. great write. :)

[SimpleMind]

Haha thanks Marc! And yes, I'll probably build one soon..