End

I should have known

I watched my world fall apart

With friends on my side

Yes, I watched it with them

With popcorn

And soda

And they’re like

‘Oh man! Do it, destroy it all!’

Ba-ha-ha!

And when the show was over

They all left like I wasn't there

Leaving all their trashes for me to clean

Then I glanced at the screen

Dude… my life’s entertaining, eh?

 

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

This really occurs sometimes, when you've to entertain your guests and then you're left with all the trash that they left. Well, that's how it should happen maybe (:

[SimpleMind]

Haha well, maybe.. and maybe not. It's people's choice, maybe they want it to be that way.. but well, humans are critical beings! thanks for the read Ney!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, Mind (: Just kidding

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Yes...sadly, this does occur. We find out who our true friends are when we are at our lowest. Too many "friends" are only around in order to entertain themselves with our misfortunes so that they feel better about themselves in some way. Terrible. I quite liked this one.

[SimpleMind]

I can't agree more Fri... they must be feeling high for themselves whenever I'm around.. thanks greatly!!

[Krista Weiss]

Sorry about your friends :/ at least you got a great poem out of it all!

[SimpleMind]

You have a point! I should thank them one of these days.. thanks a lot! You took a positive route for this one, I appreciate it :)

[Sami Khalil]

A little humor in this write... Straightforward...:)

[SimpleMind]

yeah I'm trying.. thanks a lot!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Invisible]

so random! oh you lol

[SimpleMind]

Haha is it? Thanks Oldy..!

[Invisible]

yep

[Mike Emil]

if your world is ending why clean up the trash?
this is the problem with kids today
you don't listen and you waste time that is betterspent on gin and saki
but you have promise kid
write more

[SimpleMind]

Cleanliness is still next to Godliness , hehe ..can't help it, I'm born in this generation! Thanks for the read Em, I always love it!

[Gerald Parker]

Better to write about it than keep quiet.

[SimpleMind]

Indeed :)

[Shannen Forrester]

Sorry I've been away for a while, brilliant poem but now I'm worried about you...

[SimpleMind]

It's okay Shazza.. the world is a big place with different people.. I just happen to be in the wrong side hahaha

[s y e]

Sounds like you need to get new friends, trust me, I've been there. It's not nice, leave them, get them out your life.

Nice rant

[SimpleMind]

If I get new friends, I'm gonna end up having new set of friends watching my world crumble. It's like that, and it sucks. Well, we all have these kinds of friends, don't we?

[s y e]

I got rid of mine, but maybe your other friends will be more caring....

[SimpleMind]

That's lucky of you... and yes, I hope so

[Frieda P]

If your so-called friends are 'watching' your life fall apart with popcorn, you've got a problem here. What kind of friends are these, sounds like you need to find some new ones dude! Nice rant of a poem.

[SimpleMind]

Yes, those kind of friends who will hate you once you make your way to the top, and will show sympathy once you hit hard on the ground but will not offer to take you to the hospital to treat your wounds. They're everywhere, and they're like parasites in me that no matter what I do, they'll always be a part of me and there's no way I can get rid of them. In fact, they're all I've got.

[Frieda P]

Perhaps you're better off without friends like that...you're a smart girl, drop those suckers before they destroy you....

[SimpleMind]

Easier said than done :( But really Frie, I want to drop them all.. but if I do that no one will be left !

[Frieda P]

It's a big world out there, have to be other people other than those, you're wasting your precious time on them...that is not the definition of a friend....