Prithee

A Poem by SimpleMind

I pray thee...

How great Thou art

How powerful thy God

How strong thy faith

How sweet thy grace

Sins wrought

They say does not count

If thou beseech forgiveness

Yet thy God exist

To bequeath thy punishment

Death ye said

Is a graceful exit

Returning the life

To the one who gave it

But dear you open thy eyes

Stop listening to the music of lies

Thy life is a dust, no one will see

Thy vague existence is a vengeance to society

You ain’t a star, you ain’t sky

Ye is just a rotten soul who’ll die

Yes, a rotten soul like me

Though thy flesh is of beauty

Judgment cometh

Beware my friend

Thy God won’t be there

He won’t be there, but thou will be in His prayer

© 2013 SimpleMind

Author's Note

Poetry ~
It's all about poetry and my attempt to explore my limit in writing..so please don't think that I'm a creepy person.

Enjoy reading guys, and reviews will be greatly appreciated. Personal or technical, whatever's in your mind :)

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Gerald Parker

What's going on in your head, SimpleMind? I have no concept of a god - what is it?

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Sorry for this late reply, but well... I was just thinking that maybe God is really always around, m.. read more

Faffy

i wouldnt be reviewing right now if i thought you were a creep =P

aaaaaaaaaaand im jealous to say the least, very, very jealous of your skill.

i feel like this is a very "here endeth the lesson"-esque type poem, i love your imagery and your word choices they make it enjoyable to read and delve into the intricate meanings you create

my fav part must be :

Thy life is a dust, no one will see
Thy vague existence is a vengeance to society

Koodoos, myfriend