Prithee

I pray thee...

How great Thou art

How powerful thy God

How strong thy faith

How sweet thy grace

 

Sins wrought

They say does not count

If thou beseech forgiveness

Yet thy God exist

To bequeath thy punishment

 

Death ye said

Is a graceful exit

Returning the life

To the one who gave it

 

But dear you open thy eyes

Stop listening to the music of lies

Thy life is a dust, no one will see

Thy vague existence is a vengeance to society

 

You ain’t a star, you ain’t sky

Ye is just a rotten soul who’ll die

Yes, a rotten soul like me

Though thy flesh is of beauty

 

Judgment cometh

Beware my friend

Thy God won’t be there

He won’t be there, but thou will be in His prayer

 

~

Author's Note

Poetry ~
It's all about poetry and my attempt to explore my limit in writing..so please don't think that I'm a creepy person.

Enjoy reading guys, and reviews will be greatly appreciated. Personal or technical, whatever's in your mind :)

Reviews

[Nina]

Might be creepy, yet really good!!! Great job Simple ^^

[SimpleMind]

Thanks deeply!! :)

[Cookie]

I absolutely love this line:

You ain’t a star, you ain’t sky
Ye is just a rotten soul who’ll die


This is wonderful!

[SimpleMind]

I'm damn scared of dying ... now I wonder how I made this one.. but yes, we'll all die perhaps.. thanks :)

[Shannen Forrester]

Really good Simple... If creepy as hell!

[SimpleMind]

Ohw Shazza!!! Thanks a lot!

[Mike Emil]

text
it's all about the letters going up and down
is this the dts?

[SimpleMind]

haha not at all i guess

[Dr. Wood ?]

I have no God but respect those that do......we may never meet again

[SimpleMind]

I didn't mean to pry.. but are you an atheist?

[Dr. Wood ?]

heaven is in your mind...that is what I believe...If you have a God..and you fully believe then he exists..I do not have one

[SimpleMind]

I'm honestly speechless

[Angel Charles]

I enjoyed reading it,
The picture, when i saw it I was like woah! o.O
But then it made sense,
Good job!

[SimpleMind]

I'm glad it did :) thanks for the read!

[Invisible]

Jesus Christ, the first thing i see when i open this poem is a creepy goddamn picture! lol. and god said, be thou not afraid :)

[SimpleMind]

Never be afraid! Haha but God wants us to be afraid of him, doesn't He? hehe thanks for dropping by dear old :)

[Invisible]

I think Christians, Catholics and Baptists believe god wants us to be afraid of him, but whether or not he does no one really knows, I just know that if he wants me to be afraid of him, is that really the kinda god I want to be with someday?
and you're welcome lol

[SimpleMind]

Yeah right.. but it's religion after all. Anyway, we're free to think what God is like.. :)

[Invisible]

i'd hope so but I doubt many would agree with you, or at least many if they're at all like bibliacs I've met before, they tend to be self-righteous and are liking thinking of their favorite chapters as we speak to confront me lol

[Tantra Bensko]

Nice experimentation with the fonts, which creates the effect quite nicely, especially in conjunction with the image.

[SimpleMind]

Hehe yes, it sorta came playful.. which was ironic because the piece's supposed to be serious.. thanks greatly!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) you did great :) can't say a word. It is dark and stunning. Good job.

[SimpleMind]

Not as stunning as yours Marc.. thanks a lot by the way :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An alomost touching piece really, guiding and ecplains ones thought clearly.

[SimpleMind]

Hehe thanks a lot Thom :)