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I am a dark soul

Lost in the light

Blinded by the Gospel

Befriended by the angels

 

Suddenly my burnt flesh

Healed by itself

And between my grieves and sufferings

I found happiness

 

Then I saw their faces

So bright and so light

Coming towards me

With arms open wide

 

I was petrified

I wanted to hide

But there’s nowhere to go

So I shouted, ‘In the name of Satan, be lost!’

 

They laughed

And said I should be at ease

Saying that I am saved

That I no longer be enslaved

 

I ran away

I searched for darkness

I looked for the demons

But I couldn’t find them

 

For I have sinned against Satan

And this is my repentance

~

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

"The unleash of alter ego" I was surprised with your comeback. This is more deep and unparalleled mind control kind of piece. I know you wanted to reverse the usual good vs bad to bad vs. good and you have success for that. Keep writing my friend, remember all angels created by fire including the fallen one, which they are all in light form not in the dark form, only human being created this realm of dark space in time immemorial. Glad you comeback.

[SimpleMind]

Haha this is just a simple poem actually, but thanks for dressing this with wonderful colors :)
read moreHaha this is just a simple poem actually, but thanks for dressing this with wonderful colors :)
Yup2x,..I'm back..thanks Marlon!!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Glad you here :) seems WC is incomplete without u :)

[SimpleMind]

That's over statement!! I'm the one who needs WC and not WC that is needing me hehe but I love you all guys here. I'm the one who won't be complete without WC :'>

[Guilt]

You are darkness beneath the light you shine. A choice to live the destructive path, rather than the one that would promise you salvation. That is an incredible concept. As a fan of hero and villain stories, this is a great concept. I'm glad I found someone that can write about it.

- Guilt

[SimpleMind]

Thanks Guilt...

[Frieda P]

Sounds possessed, this one is ominous. Am I supposed to be able to decipher that title? You've lost it, in a good way! Intriguing piece this one, much enjoyed!

[SimpleMind]

Haha no need to decipher..I actually don't know what those letters mean...hehe Thanks a lot Frie!!! :)