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I am a dark soul

Lost in the light

Blinded by the Gospel

Befriended by the angels

 

Suddenly my burnt flesh

Healed by itself

And between my grieves and sufferings

I found happiness

 

Then I saw their faces

So bright and so light

Coming towards me

With arms open wide

 

I was petrified

I wanted to hide

But there’s nowhere to go

So I shouted, ‘In the name of Satan, be lost!’

 

They laughed

And said I should be at ease

Saying that I am saved

That I no longer be enslaved

 

I ran away

I searched for darkness

I looked for the demons

But I couldn’t find them

 

For I have sinned against Satan

And this is my repentance

~

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Thought provoking, I don't get the line that he have sinned against Satan... Why should he/she repent?

[SimpleMind]

Hehe the narrator is a demon or a devil... and devils are supposed to be dark and bad... but the demon here found salvation and thus he sinned against Satan :)

[Rhianne Ney]

I see, great poem though~

[SimpleMind]

Hehe thanks :)

[Rhianne Ney]

welcomez

[Ayvid N]

A very thought-provoking read. I have great faith in repentance and its virtues. It slays demons for sure. Great poem.

[SimpleMind]

That makes you a strong person..yay! thanks for the read :)

[Akashi]

Awww.... I wish I was such a great poet as you...

[SimpleMind]

Of course you are!

[Akashi]

You are.

[Cookie]

that was awesome, it's a view I've not seen before, well done.

[SimpleMind]

haha i'm glad to be first then.. thanks :)

[JR Darewood]

okay that was awesome. I love the reversal.

[SimpleMind]

I'm glad you did :) Thanks

[kublakhan27]

Very ominous and clever, well done :)

[SimpleMind]

Thanks a lot :)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Shannen Forrester]

Interesting and clever... and of course brilliant as always, even if my head is still spinning a little :)

[SimpleMind]

Haha thanks Shazza...always :)

[Mike Emil]

you are on te cusp of understanding vegatables
i might be pleased

[SimpleMind]

haha you're being deep again

[Gerald Parker]

This is an interesting poem which has got me thinking and I like poems that make me think. However, I am bewildered by the phrase 'blinded by the Gospel' - followed by 'Then I saw their faces
So bright and so light' Whose faces did you manage to see after being blinded? Do you have angels and demons where you live?

[SimpleMind]

I'm glad I made someone like you think :)

Well, the speaker here is a devil..and so he was blinded by the gospel...sort of a demon being good. ..the faces he saw there were of angels hehe

--angels and demons where I live? demons, YES! plenty of them actually XD

[Gerald Parker]

How did he see if he was blinded? How come the demon was good? Because he'd seen the light? He he. Is your boss a demon?

[SimpleMind]

No, no, no, this poem is all fiction hehe

The demon became good that's why he sinned against Satan and he is willing to repent

[Gerald Parker]

OMG. Terrible thing fiction. He he.

[SimpleMind]

Hahaha :)
Fiction!!