(っ*'ω'*)っ A Letter

(っ*'ω'*)っ A Letter

A Story by SimpleMind
"

Love isn't only for humans

"

To my dearest beloved,

 

                  

            I know I’ve been a nuisance since I came into your life. But all I want is to be with you, be in the same place as you. I want to kiss your face all the time.

 

            To tickle your nose..

 

                          your cheeks..

 

                          your chin..

 

                          your jaw..

 

            I want to kiss your neck all ‘round and leave tiny pinkish marks, as if an accessory that you love.

 

            But no..

           

            You are ashamed of me. You bow your head down and you are scared to be seen with me. You think you’re not good having me around.

 

            I know you don’t like me, but darn! Do you really have to make me feel like I’m a piece of s**t on your face? You even make yourself bleed just to get rid of me. And it hurts me. But I know it hurts you more. Your flesh is my flesh, and mine is yours. If you hurt yourself, you’ll hurt us both.

 

            I know, I’ve left you many times"very, very many times"but I keep on coming back. Don’t you see? No one else loves you as much as I do. No one else will stay with you no matter what.

 

            But you always pinch me to death and that my tear drops on your cheeks. Seeing me arid makes you happy and it kills me slowly. Blood becomes my tears and my body becomes a hole. You follow me with your cat-sharp nails wherever I go, and then curse me wherever I stay.

 

            I feel so unwanted.

 

            I feel so useless that I even ask God what’s the point of my existence.

           

            All I know is that, sooner or later I will have to leave you behind. Yes, my kind doesn’t live long. I will vanish one day and will not be back again. But the memories we share together, they will remain until the end.

 

            So please, just accept me for who I am. Allow me to give you thousand memories before I go.

 

            Because no matter how much you hurt me, I’ll come back. I will come back as long as I can until I can come back no more.  I’ll come back because I need you…I need you to live.




 

 

 

With eternal love,


Pimples  (ω)

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

P.S.

         I will be gone for three or four days, but I will be back soon. I just need space for now. And if I come back, can you please be gentle to me?

© 2013 SimpleMind


Author's Note

SimpleMind
Hey!

--So this is a letter written by a pimple, or an acne, or the sort to a girl. This sounds weird, but pimples also have their own dilemmas and they can also feel.

The credit's not solely mine. This piece won't be here without leinahtan's help and crazy ideas. Thanks a lot Niel!

But actually, I'm just the one who arranged the words and sentences so I know I messed somewhere in tense or syntax, perhaps. Please feel free to give feed backs if you ever spot some :)

Thanks (・ω・)ノ

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Couldn't help but chuckle at this story. Very amusing. I really have enjoyed how you take things and put them together in a way that changes how they are percieved, and how they play off of other situations. Unique and entertaining! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Welcome.. and thanks a lot for the kind review. Actually, most of the amusing lines there came from .. read more
Haha brilliant! As if being a teenager weren't hard enough!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha yes, I'm pretty sure the life of a pimple is short although to a teenager it seems an eternity! l.. read more
SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

It's just scary... if all these pimples will die.. your face's gonna be a pimple graveyard XD But .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Pimple graveyard, that's priceless!! ;-P
from the viewpoint of a pimple, utterly unique. clever in its own right. at first i was gonna say you two aren't good for each other, break it off for good. but now i understand the relationship entirely. well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
hahahaha! nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
pimples need love too
but brandy will soothe them so then don't make the skin ache so very much
brandy can solve anything medicinal for skin disorders

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mike Emil

11 Years Ago

i am not...i am muse
SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

must be nice :)
Mike Emil

11 Years Ago

you can be too
there are job openings
sheesh! it's a big market out tere girl
Very creative I like the unusualness of this. Though no matter what it says I can really feel no sympathy for the dreaded pimple. An amusing write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Same here... I feel like the pimple's writing for me...and it's so frustrating and scary XD Thanks a.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
This person is totally abject and at the mercy of her lover. If her lover despises her, he's not the one she should be chasing him. Quite a good write but it's hard to fathom out why it was written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

:)
The sender is actually a pimple. (or could be acne) hehe
Gerald Parker

11 Years Ago

Very clever - had me fooled! Well done. You'll go far! Now, get back to work!
SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Duty hour's over :)
But thanks..haha I'm glad this one made a trick XD

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