(っ*'ω'*)っ A Letter

(っ*'ω'*)っ A Letter

A Story by SimpleMind
"

Love isn't only for humans

"

To my dearest beloved,

 

                  

            I know I’ve been a nuisance since I came into your life. But all I want is to be with you, be in the same place as you. I want to kiss your face all the time.

 

            To tickle your nose..

 

                          your cheeks..

 

                          your chin..

 

                          your jaw..

 

            I want to kiss your neck all ‘round and leave tiny pinkish marks, as if an accessory that you love.

 

            But no..

           

            You are ashamed of me. You bow your head down and you are scared to be seen with me. You think you’re not good having me around.

 

            I know you don’t like me, but darn! Do you really have to make me feel like I’m a piece of s**t on your face? You even make yourself bleed just to get rid of me. And it hurts me. But I know it hurts you more. Your flesh is my flesh, and mine is yours. If you hurt yourself, you’ll hurt us both.

 

            I know, I’ve left you many times"very, very many times"but I keep on coming back. Don’t you see? No one else loves you as much as I do. No one else will stay with you no matter what.

 

            But you always pinch me to death and that my tear drops on your cheeks. Seeing me arid makes you happy and it kills me slowly. Blood becomes my tears and my body becomes a hole. You follow me with your cat-sharp nails wherever I go, and then curse me wherever I stay.

 

            I feel so unwanted.

 

            I feel so useless that I even ask God what’s the point of my existence.

           

            All I know is that, sooner or later I will have to leave you behind. Yes, my kind doesn’t live long. I will vanish one day and will not be back again. But the memories we share together, they will remain until the end.

 

            So please, just accept me for who I am. Allow me to give you thousand memories before I go.

 

            Because no matter how much you hurt me, I’ll come back. I will come back as long as I can until I can come back no more.  I’ll come back because I need you…I need you to live.




 

 

 

With eternal love,


Pimples  (ω)

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

P.S.

         I will be gone for three or four days, but I will be back soon. I just need space for now. And if I come back, can you please be gentle to me?

© 2013 SimpleMind


Author's Note

SimpleMind
Hey!

--So this is a letter written by a pimple, or an acne, or the sort to a girl. This sounds weird, but pimples also have their own dilemmas and they can also feel.

The credit's not solely mine. This piece won't be here without leinahtan's help and crazy ideas. Thanks a lot Niel!

But actually, I'm just the one who arranged the words and sentences so I know I messed somewhere in tense or syntax, perhaps. Please feel free to give feed backs if you ever spot some :)

Thanks (・ω・)ノ

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A great piece simple :)
Wonderfully written and very clever :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Ow Shazzzzaa!! I miss you so much and your rosey cheeks and blue eyess!!
Shannen Forrester

11 Years Ago

Aaaaaaaand now the while site knows about my damn rosey checks lol, miss you to simple :)
SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

and..and..your water blue eyes :)
two emotions in one..started with pain ended with grief..a simple note of that 'acne or pimple' made it funny..really enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Haha I'm glad you did :)
Was very confused and had no clue what this was about until the end! :P I was like jeez this relationship sucks! But I eventually got it :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks :)
I agree with John.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


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SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

:'>Thanks a lot !
This is a very flowing and engaging piece with an unexpected twist. Very original!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
haha so cute

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Thanks :3
Very amusing write! Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sir :)
This piece has brilliant ideas behind it; the idea that everything has consciousness is valid ad when applied to your subject is also amusing and makes for a delightful read. Well done Simple Mind... This is very well written, and you brought a smile to my face today when only sadness surrounds me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago


Ow~ I'm glad this little piece of ours caused someone to smile...it's our pleasure :)
This made me smile.. and also brought to mind some painful memories! Yes.. love is much to be desired by everything in the universe. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


SimpleMind

11 Years Ago

pretty right! Thanks :)

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