Shooting Star

I fell from the heavens aflame.

i was a star, not an angel with wings.
i burned too brightly only to die out too soon.
i wasn't made to fall with grace.
i was made to crash and burn.

Reviews

[Addict With a Pen]

Very deep, I love it. The title and inspiration from a shooting star is very cool. You truly changed the wishful calm meaning of a shooting star, and instead wrote your own heartfelt tragedy within the scenario. Great write!

[GalaxyGhost]

Love it! I took an astronomy class and reason why was because when I was 15, 16, I went camping with several acquaintances and fell in love with the stars.

[Chrys Marie]

Thank you! The stars are easy to fall in love with.

[GalaxyGhost]

I totally agree!

[iamshadowine]

This is so deep and so nice! i loved your thought process on this one!
keep writing :D