Redemption

My love, I would go through Hell just for you.

the devil may have claimed his soul
but i have claimed his heart
and i will break down the devil's gates
and tear through the circles of hell
even if it means damning myself
but giving salvation to him

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

Great powerful short poem! I have done this- many years ago with my husband, before we were married. It is not fantasy- it is real, and the battle intense, but well worth it. I think of the movie "what dreams may come" where the main character travels to hell to find his love and rescue her, almost losing his own soul in the process. Great idea for a poem, and well-written, with the intensity of declaration.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Love really has no limits as this poem of yours shows. When love is intense we can make the ultimate sacrifice for our beloved.
Nicely written

[iamshadowine]

this is amazing as hell! loved it!
keep writing :D

[Papaya]

A very strong female voice here, I love the idea of the woman doing the saving.

[Elmarie]

Hi Chrys Marie

Such a dramatic lovely idea. Bringing in the wonderful selfless love of a woman. I always think they portray the damsel in distress so often, but this sacrifice, this true dedicated love of women is such a virtue of the feminine, rescuing maybe not as dramatic as prince charming on his horse but still saves the life of a doomed soul.
Great stuff.
Blessings

El