do you feel the shadow weighing heavy on your shoulder? company to keep you cold in the dark and mad as a dog. darling, know your demons will never go away because these shadows, these monsters, they're forever a part of us.
Amazing. How much pain is presented in just 5 lines. Shows a side to the author that says 'whats broken cannot be fixed' with just a thought written down about regrets and decisions. I love it. Short poems really interest me, and the way you shape your thoughts amazes me as I read through your work and poems.
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8 Years Ago
I'm really grateful for this great review. Thank you so much!
Hi Chrys Marie
Lovely stuff. These dark shadows within our souls, part of our souls. This poem brought back something my Grandma once said to me when you meet the crazy, mean nasty old woman in your head tell her you are going to feed the wise one instead.
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Blessings
El
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Amazing. How much pain is presented in just 5 lines. Shows a side to the author that says 'whats broken cannot be fixed' with just a thought written down about regrets and decisions. I love it. Short poems really interest me, and the way you shape your thoughts amazes me as I read through your work and poems.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I'm really grateful for this great review. Thank you so much!