blossomed deffodil...

wrote for my mom and her pain she felt when she lost her love, her support.....

Standing at an empty window, starring towards a barren land
A land which was once covered with daffodils
Nurtured  with love smile and joy,
But now just the emptiness......

Love blossomed on that empty window
sorrow and happiness, spring and the fall
brought the two together
but now just the haunting silence......where the hands held each other
in the arms they watched the sunset and sunrise together
but now so far away,
couldn't even reach each other.......

the hearts which understood the silence
felt the very presence,
but now couldn't even hear the screams......

drenched in the thunderous storm
standing at the empty window
still awaits to be held in the arms
for the warmth to melt away the emptiness
still awaits for the rain to stop
for the spring to make the daffodils bloom again........

Reviews

[Chris]

Understanding and reliving...day-after-day - waiting... til the waiting is all that's left.

[Jitender Kaur]

thanks for reading.... n yes n the end all thats left is just waiting... n waiting...

[Baban.A.A]

I trust the absence of reality caused the speaker to dream. dreaming is beautiful but rarely brings back reality, it may make you happy but temperarily as happiness is in reality, but dreaming and beavering away will bring a reality you never have wondered about in all our lives. thanks and well done.

[Jitender Kaur]

thanks a lot for your review i really appreciate it... n i think being a human all we can do is dream n wish....