Seeking

solitude?
love?
fame?
sorrowless days?
pleasant nights?
what is it i seek

Reviews

[Ian Duncan Arbogast]

Hello there. I really like this poem. It has a nice pace to it. I also love how it incorporates the title in so many lines like an echo. You have some serious talent. You deserve more appeal 'cause you're pretty good! I look forward to more from you.

I would also like to point out that I love the tone of this piece. Fantastic write!


-Ian Arbogast 2009 Age 15