Shadow and Darkness Claim Thee

Shadow and Darkness Claim Thee

A Poem by Chris
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When Shadow claims thee thy heart turns cold and black with suffering .
When Darkness claim thee thy heart turns too ashes and thy soul falls into thy self into the nothingness of the abyss.
But when Shadow and Darkness claim thee your soul and thy body  become filled  with hate and rage you kill and dont even know who your killing our who you are your eyes are black with Hatred  you become a bieng  of hate  you become empty and hollow then you give in too the darkness when you give up 
 
All that remains is a monster filled with hate and pain thats what happens when you have nothing left  thats what happens when you lose hope.
That is what happens when shadow and darkness claim thee.

© 2011 Chris


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Chris
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This is really good...you've captured it perfectly what happens when someone gives in...you're a good writer :)

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Added on August 22, 2011
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Chris
Chris

lorain, OH



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My name is Christopher I am 18 and single and live in Lorain Ohio and in my spare time i read and write poetry. Another thing about me is that one day i plan on leaving my mark on the world no matter.. more..

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