What remains

What remains

A Poem by Chris
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Something i wrote right after i got dumped.

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What is love if it leads too pain leaveing you empty and hollow what is love when it can be shattered so easily what is love if it can be undone by one mistake .
 What is love if it leads too pain was it love or was it pain when that love is undone what remains love or pain.

© 2011 Chris


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Reminds me of that song.. "What is love? Baby, don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no more."
Love comes with pain and heartache. Love takes work and commitment. If one or the other isn't committed, then all it will lead to is pain. Relationships at your age in life shouldn't hurt you so much. Most people aren't committed at your age, they're just looking for a good time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

I am very mature for only being 18 you see I'm not like every one else i treat love like a bond in w.. read more
good question... damn, made me think. nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Chris
Chris

lorain, OH



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My name is Christopher I am 18 and single and live in Lorain Ohio and in my spare time i read and write poetry. Another thing about me is that one day i plan on leaving my mark on the world no matter.. more..

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