Surprise

I went into the woods

late one afternoon

the sun had set upon the grass

and birds whistled out a tune.

These places ever change,

day to day not one the same.

Something somewhere lies a wonder

--curiosity's aim.

It was early in the spring

but alone I was not

since I saw a pretty flower

that winter had forgot.

Reviews

[shoaib]

i like the poem but i think you worded things out of over just to sound poetic, would just say rearrange some of the words for consistency of the flow
but otherwise i think you did a great job :) hope you find this comment only constructive okay :)
shoaib

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the last stanza was such a delight..loved it