Always

Always I've been sat 

here. Still in the grass, to breathe 

the scent of flowers, 

and see the dew set before 

sunrise, still, as the 

night, hungry 

came to embrace 

them all.  Always I've 

been sat here.  Even before 

this morning began.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

This is so peaceful and gentle, and has deep meaning too...So nice..:)

[.]

philosophical moment..liked it

[Tony]

Nice use of emjambment-- it hightens the flowing effect of "always" theme of the poem. Oh yes, and the last phrase "Even before this morning began" really continues the poem into "always"-- know what I mean. That's brilliant.

M

[Wondering Mind]

always lovely.