some days

i don't know if it's a flaw in my genetic makeup

but there is a chaos in my heart

that rages so loudly, i cannot silence it

and a brokenness in some part of my mind

that time simply cannot heal

and some days

it feels like there are so many cracks

in the foundation of my being

that i cannot hold myself together at all. 

Reviews

[Amit]

When someone looses his/her faith and confidence, the broken heart and cracked brains and etc. gets in the frame. But being confident on you is the better way to heal the inner pain. The poetic description was so touchy.

[Chris Shaw]

Your words touched me christina. Your poetic expression really got through to this reader, and I sense what those days of brokenness must be like for you. Conveying your thoughts in writing I do believe to be helpful, a therapy for you. Your poem is sad, and I wish you lighter days in the future.

Chris