i belong to someone else

if i am the sun 

you are the moon 

and he is the stars that separate us 

but there are so many of them that I can't help but love

and there is only one of you

Reviews

[Lex12]

This is such a good poem!

[christina]

Thank you so much! That's super kind of you to say :)

[SZHZIA]

A very short and beautiful love poem filled with true emotions and feelings. I love the metaphors that you have used to express your thoughts in this poem. well written. Thanks for sharing.

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szhzia

[mercy party]

how sweet and nice. great poem and great job!

[Lovecraft]

Short but lovely. I get a sense of "you" being separated from the man you love by someone else maybe.

Nice work, Christina.

[christina]

Very insightful and pretty accurate. Thank you so much :) You're so kind.

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Nicely done. Clear message with sense of humour. And all together make very nice poem.

[christina]

Hey, thank you. That's really sweet :) I'm glad you liked it.

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yes i did it s realy beautiful