That Special Girl

That Special Girl

A Poem by Souls Set Aflame
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a poem i wrote about a girl that i really like, yet probably doesn't know how much i like her

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The beauty fills the room with her glow

The cutie looks over and smiles at me

Too bad

Too bad she might not know

Too bad I probably don't stand a chance

I wish I may I wish I might

That I could take her up

Never letting go

She's too good for me

I sit here watching her from across the room

Hoping she'll look up

So I can see her beautiful face again

As I stand in the stands not watching the game

It feels like everyone else melts away

And it's just me and her, together forever

Where no on else can touch us

Where everyone else disappears

We'll be together forever

Then I get snapped out of the dream

And brought back into reality

Where she feels so far away from me

But she's so close

If only

Wishing I could run to her and never let go

Too bad

Why does she torment me?

The cutie The beauty

The only one for me

© 2008 Souls Set Aflame


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And brought back into reality

Where she feels so far away from me

But she's so close

i loved those lines.
this is a great piece:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Where she feels so far away from me

But she's so close
.. absolutely loved these lines.. umm it gets a bit rough with the pattern changes but other than that..great piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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hey all, ummm, my name is ethan, i'm single but taken in a way, i try to live my life for the Lord, sumtimes it's hard though, i am about 5'10", i have short brown hair, i am really into tennis and mu.. more..

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