Blinded Hearts

this is a new song i started on the other day,it's the same genre as all my other songs i have posted on here, it's unfinished and open for suggestions/additions, so feel free to comment or send suggestions for it

Crucified for all men

Eyes don't believe

The wonder

The beauty

Of their Lord

Faithlessness runs amok

In their hardened hearts

No belief

No faith in the good book

No trust in His words; His actions

Pierced hands hold no meaning for them any more

Reviews

[MorganLyn]

they keep living and breathing
but they just don't understand
Without Christ we're all dying
never grasping the helping hand...
***sorry this just came to me as I read this. I think it was very good. I can't wait to see what the chorus is like!! maybe a suggestion.. it could be about one person accepting their salvation and actually beginning to see and and pity the world and its lostness..
keep it up!

[None]

This is glorious! You really have the reader examine themselves and see the disappointment in the world. Since I am hopeful and God is so forgiving and merciful, I would make the next verse to discuss how if one heart could just turn around...and also show the love that would be displayed in that person's life...the forgiveness for all, the mercy.
Even alone, your words stand mighty are quite reflective. Another thought to me is that we really can't speak for God and whether He would feel this way or not, since many still belief.
I will have to check out more of your writing. Excellent!!