Close to the end

Suffering , Gasping  and Weezing for my last breath

All the sudden signs of an untimely death.

The Last things ill ever see sitting infront of my own eyes

The last sound that i hear is my own loud cry.

I lay there fading slowly as my life flashes before my eyes

All i can think about is not saying my goodbyes.

Tell my mother, my sister, my family i love them

i should have told them myself but this death has suppressed that.

I try and I try to not follow the light ,

im leaving this earth early fading into the night.

i lose complete control over my feet and the lost but never forgotten family,

is who i am now going to meet

i didnt want to leave my friends and family behind

though it wasnt of my choice, i wasnt allowed to pick a side. 

i can hear my mother talking and i follow her voice.

huffing and puffing i find my way through

she would told me " i will never go anywhere, atleast not without you"

This nightmare is actually better than it seem's

When i recieved my mothers touch

i was notified that it was all  just a dream.

Reviews

[Layla J Omorose]

pretty well written Chris. And this just came off the top of you head...good job.

[chrissy0728]

thankk you that comment really helped me alot

[Thug Life]

daaaaamn!! intense! i luv it... i was waitin for sum kinda even more tragic endin but u pulled it right back up.. i dunno if u wrote this from personal experience or not.. but those r the craziest nightmares.. ive had em.. great write