Dreaming Dreams

I dream...you dream...dreams.

Dreaming Dreams

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You saw my dreams struggling in a tangled mess

From hundreds of miles away

                 You patiently reassured me that you would love each one            

Freeing them into reality

 

The way you worked them were as an artist would

Sculpting each individual one into an larger than life work of art

It was as if you knew each one intimately

Knowing how to touch them in ways no one else could

 

You've shaped not only my future, but my past

Dreams I've long forgotten, are now lucid again

I've watched in awe as you pulled them from deep within

Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire

 

I often ask myself if I'm dreaming inside those dreams you're making

And little by little life is becoming real inside those dreams

Each dream you put together you get closer to your dream

Where you don't just exist in mine.

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Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a beautiful write, Christian. As always, your work is breathtaking and leaves a beauty in my mind that lingers for hours after reading your work. Here is my favorite line.

"Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire"

Never stop writing. You are an amazing poet. :)

[Eve Ola]

very beautiful start and i love this line..You've shaped not only my future, but my past.. Good job here :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

It is beautiful. I love the way you describe the dream. You have the best poems. I love them and look ford to them. Great Job!!!

[John Ryan]

very wonderful

I often ask myself if I'm dreaming inside those dreams you're making
And little by little life is becoming real inside those dreams
Each dream you put together you get closer to your dream
Where you don't just exist in mine.

bliss

[Emily]

Love the meaning! Well done.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Profound piece. Written with passion

[Dancing_Elixir]

Aye baybay!
I love it. In fact, I feel inspired to paint from it... These lines in particular:

I've watched in awe as you pulled them from deep within
Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire

💗

[Sami Khalil]

You pulled the deep, dreamed the inside and revealed the intimate...Excellent poet and friend...:)................

[Frieda P]

Dreams turned to reality, what's better than that colorful fire? Nor exist in time either...

'a' larger than life

[KWP]

This is fabulous and quite mesmerising all at the same time ...

[Baby Ricochet]

Man is that giving up a lot of control. It is romantic though. So it works