Dreaming Dreams

I dream...you dream...dreams.

Dreaming Dreams

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You saw my dreams struggling in a tangled mess

From hundreds of miles away

                 You patiently reassured me that you would love each one            

Freeing them into reality

 

The way you worked them were as an artist would

Sculpting each individual one into an larger than life work of art

It was as if you knew each one intimately

Knowing how to touch them in ways no one else could

 

You've shaped not only my future, but my past

Dreams I've long forgotten, are now lucid again

I've watched in awe as you pulled them from deep within

Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire

 

I often ask myself if I'm dreaming inside those dreams you're making

And little by little life is becoming real inside those dreams

Each dream you put together you get closer to your dream

Where you don't just exist in mine.

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Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a beautiful write, Christian. As always, your work is breathtaking and leaves a beauty in my mind that lingers for hours after reading your work. Here is my favorite line.

"Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire"

Never stop writing. You are an amazing poet. :)

[EGabriellS]

This is a very beautiful and thought-provoking piece. It almost makes me think of the film Inception with how you tie together the dreams of two different people. Well done.

[Rosi S. Phillips]

Oh, I loved this. Really great. The repetition was on point, and the calling to dreams in everything was very inception-y.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Very beautiful, I loved it.

[Dark Poet]

There's people that come to know our darkest and most beautiful parts of our minds that seem to affect us so easily. I really loved this poem in many different ways.

[CS]

very beautiful. Loved it.

[ReneeJ]

"Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colourful fire" my favourite line! beautiful piece. I always like the calm, still mood in your poems. They remind me of the sunset slowly leaving. This flows and I truly enjoyed reading it

[joshua deathdealer]

There has many breathes of beauty here and truth. I really like how you perceive and follow through with your pen. A touching poem.

[NoelHC]

I read some where recently that when we dream of a person it is because they are thinking of you. The line "I'm dreaming inside those dreams you're making" made me think of that movie "Inception"; this poem is complex in its multiple layers and level, like the film.
Well done Christian.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I gather up three interpretation from this poem.Firstly,i've an awkward ability to see the future- i dream of future events.Mostly they are horrific and leave me trembling in my bed,but God has helped me to come over it and now i can use that ability- i connected to this poem "the way you worked them as an artist would" and yes lord has done that to me.Secondly i guess this is about our dreams and goals of future"each dream you put together you get closer to me" - a talk between us and our souls. Thirdly a message a lover dreams of his beloved-"you patiently reassured me that you would change them to reality". A very nice write with profound depth. :)

~Sophy