Infinite Design

The collision of two people meant to collide.

Infinite Design

The night was holding its breath

Being sure not to rustle the trees as eyes in the darkness watched

His hands were wrapped around her waist

Pulling her into his space of ultimate adventure

She could feel his energy charging her worn out heart

She bit her lips from the rush from his universal filaments

That was uniting their souls once bound together in the beginning

The great attractors are at work tonight

As fate & destiny agree on their new destination

Written in the stars

The laws of attraction are instituted

Wrapping them within a cocoon from the singularity of true love

Paralleled in a cosmos they were born in

Given the name Infinite Design

By the Designer of all that is and all that will be

Two pieces of a puzzle put together by his inventive hands

Colliding to create an explosive duo

They kiss.

 

Reviews

[Dancing_Elixir]

How are you so amazing? You have such a brilliant way of piecing words together to make my simple day something wonderful. 💗💗

The great attractors are at work tonight
As fate & destiny agree on their new destination

They kiss

.... Perfect

[Natalie Dieudonne]

The great attractors are at work tonight
As fate & destiny agree on their new destination
Written in the stars

Not surprise you wrote yet another yet, amazing piece. I love the symbol!

[Dark Poet]

I like how you describe love as being an artistic feeling.

"The great attractors are at work tonight
As fate & destiny agree on their new destination
Written in the stars
The laws of attraction are instituted"

That was my favorite part. Beautiful!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I love this poem.

The descriptions are amazing.

You really see everything. Love it.

I definitely think you used the right illustrations.

[michele vera]

Beyond Perfection........You Are A True Work of Art to Create Such Perfection....

[Elizabeth Stone]

I would suggest minor edits... please no one yell at me! It is a lovely piece, however I feel a 'hiccup' :P
'She bit her lip from the rush of his universal filaments'
I think it would fix a better flow, just my opinion!

[Fenix Flight]

Once again Blown away by your beautiful words. I lvoe reading your poems. they are so descriptive so magicall all on their own. Well done Bravo!!!!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Uffh!! The longing.. , this poem is just exquisite. The personification of night and darkness,their inevitable relation,the awaited kiss.. i liked the whole concept. Nice work... :)

~Sophy

[Duaa]

Wow so soulful..breathtakingly beautiful loved it..

[Susan Beth Horvath]

This amazing piece of poetry has a natural soulful feel that leaps right off my screen..the emotions in this poem are vast and undeniable..

[Oyindamola Shoola]

lovely poem...well penned