Found In You

What was found when I lost myself in you.

Found In You

I lose myself in you seamlessly

Time stops in your eyes

Pulling me into a world of flawless eternity

Surrounded by diamond studded skies

Dreams dart around me

Enticing me to enter them

With the lure of the unimaginable unseen

And of sins conjured in the P.M.

Your thoughts are a chaotic beautiful mess

Of unorganized fields of blossoming love & disillusions

But I'm here to tend to the fields

To weed out the rows of doubt & confusion

Your heart once thought frozen over

Sits lonely in an isolated chamber

Just wants a night in shinning stars

To guide and watch over her forever

But what I found when I lost myself

To all the magic tricks you use

While searching your heart for love

 I found myself in you.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I'm honestly speechless on what to say right now cause this was so beautifully written! Such amazing imagery, storytelling, honesty. The whole works, you definitely have it here. I love the structure you used, the tense...um, what else? Sorry, this is so...wonderful and it made my heart glow. It really brightened my night to read this and as I write this comment, I'm still trying to find words to say to myself. I loved this though! So much!

[Chris Micha]

Wow...I am truly honored dear friend

[Heaven]

This had me smiling just in the first stanza. I love your use of metaphor and your ability to make the reader (a woman, really!) feel like this is about her. It's enticing, mysterious, and makes me hungry for more. I love it!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much. I'm in Heaven with your review.

[Heaven]

And thank you for giving the honor to read it!

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow, Christian. This is perfect. Beautiful flow and word use. I adore this, write. She is one lucky lady! You have expressed yourself perfectly. Your feelings seem to flow from this poem and straight to the readers heart and soul.

Brilliant work. :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Mads. Hope you're doing well.