The Looking Glass

Where dreams touch realities hand.

The Looking Glass

 

 

We are... 

a kiss

of long awaited dreams

Placed on quivering lips of electric sensations

running down to curled toes grounded in the moment

Hands molded around hips swaying to the rhythm of the

heart pounding a beat from an adrenalized drum

Skin beading harmonic scents of desire

waiting to be licked by fiending tongues

Eyes melting in a fiery beauty

riding a soft pink sunset into the night

Miles explored by two bodies

mapping uncharted territories in the dark corners of the heart.

 

But...

here we are

Standing behind the looking glass

Searching for the last puzzle piece

To unlock two worlds wanting to collide

We're just on the other side.

 

Where forever meets

&

soulmates triumph over the formality of time.

 

True love is kinged as the ultimate ruler

&

dreams play along side of our dancing feet.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Here is the writer who is taking over the Spotlight list with one sensual piece after another! No one writes with such sparkling clear eloquence. Your style using brief lines draws a reader in each time you place your emotion on screen. "I beg only that you continue to instruct".

[Lyn Anderson]

a blend of romance and sensuality. One question, I do not understand the line "ridding two soft pink sunset into the night" Did you mean riding to? or is there some play on words here I am not following?

[Chris Micha]

KL!!!! I was hoping that the play on words would spell out what I was trying to say lol. But however, after reading it over again, I decided to change it. If you didn't get it, no one will!!! If you get a chance, let me know how it fits now. :)

[John Ryan]

wonderful style

very well written

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much John :)

[Mercy Fae]

The picture adds to the meaning and message that is further described in your wonderful poem.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Hikari :)

[joshua deathdealer]

I really do like your style. Quite romantic and deeper than this erotica floating around. Very meaningful.

[Chris Micha]

Joshua, thank you for your wonderful review :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

I enjoyed this as much as my time with my loved ones :) . Very beautifully expressed, sir. Typical of you :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my dear friend :)

[Katelyn]

Your way with words is utterly incredible. I loved every second and word of it.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Katelyn :)

[willweb]

This was beautiful Christian. A nice soft flow and feel. Enchanting would be a good word. I enjoyed this today.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Will :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah those wonderful miles that two bodies explore...as dreams play along side dancing feet..

what rhythmic words to capture the rhythm of love.

[Chris Micha]

Wow thank you so much, Jacob. An honor!

[Rosi S. Phillips]

I just need to come up with a spiel to post on every one of your poems because I have yet to find one I don't love. Christian, you have an amazing talent with words. When I read your poetry, any of your poetry, it's like the words curl around me and draw me further in. You don't simply write, you create something amazing and beautiful. I can't thank you enough for sharing your poetry with me and everyone else. Please, please post on other sites so people can read your work!

[Chris Micha]

Haha!! You don't have to do that my dear. You've done enough already by all the wonderful things you have done. :O)