The Looking Glass

Where dreams touch realities hand.

The Looking Glass

 

 

We are... 

a kiss

of long awaited dreams

Placed on quivering lips of electric sensations

running down to curled toes grounded in the moment

Hands molded around hips swaying to the rhythm of the

heart pounding a beat from an adrenalized drum

Skin beading harmonic scents of desire

waiting to be licked by fiending tongues

Eyes melting in a fiery beauty

riding a soft pink sunset into the night

Miles explored by two bodies

mapping uncharted territories in the dark corners of the heart.

 

But...

here we are

Standing behind the looking glass

Searching for the last puzzle piece

To unlock two worlds wanting to collide

We're just on the other side.

 

Where forever meets

&

soulmates triumph over the formality of time.

 

True love is kinged as the ultimate ruler

&

dreams play along side of our dancing feet.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Here is the writer who is taking over the Spotlight list with one sensual piece after another! No one writes with such sparkling clear eloquence. Your style using brief lines draws a reader in each time you place your emotion on screen. "I beg only that you continue to instruct".

[EGabriellS]

This is a lovely piece. It was easy to read and follow. Nothing felt out of place. The entire piece was very descriptive and made me feel so much that I had to read it again. Very well done.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a beautiful piece. I liked reading it. :-)

Kaze~

[Susan Beth Horvath]

so beautifully conceived and rendered. I especially love your final verse, but all of them are exquisite. Well done

[Pure Innocence]

This portrays a dream that I hold and can't wait to unlock. Being someone who has yet to find that type of love... or just hasn't allowed myself to feel those feelings, your poem makes me excited to enter that time in my life. Thank you and well done.

[Chris Micha]

Well when you do, it will be amazing

[Ashley Griffiths]

Great piece. My favorite part is:

here we are
Standing behind the looking glass
Searching for the last puzzle piece
To unlock two worlds wanting to collide
We're just on the other side.

[Dancing_Elixir]

I knew that was you staring back at me.

“So she sat on with closed eyes, and half believed herself in Wonderland, though she knew she had but to open them again, and all would change to dull reality.”
― Lewis Carroll, Alice's Adventures in Wonderland & Through the Looking-Glass

[ReneeJ]

You can take a moment, no matter how small and turn it into something great! You are gifted my friend! Love the descriptions and the mood...everything!

[Chris Micha]

Renee, thank you so much my dear friend :)

[Moonie]

Oh my god, I love this! Wow, its really brilliant. :))
I LOVE the ending!:))

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you so much doll :)

[Moonie]

Anytime:)
Ps why "doll"?

[Chris Micha]

I'm Southern (it's what we say) doll, dear, ma'am....we try to be as courteous as possible, some of us anyway.

[Moonie]

I like "doll". =)) cowboy style!

[Chris Micha]

haha well I'll remember that :)

[Latifa]

very creative, I really enjoyed the description and the use of words to portrait this wonderful poem

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Latifa :)