I & Me

I love being me.

I & Me

 

 

I wander amongst this mass confusion inside my head

Looking at all the chaotic instabilities

of backward thought, broken coherencies, and jumbled allusions

I ponder what order would be like in a lawless land

of straight lines tied to unified thinking

Where the Thought Police usher about blossoming ideas

into their sorted disillusioned bins and quagmire holding tanks

As the insane asylum tends to the drooling masses of unstable insanity stuffed in an overcrowded ward 

Allowing some to escape over the line of sanity's invisible marked territory

Where they mingle and breed like rabbits with rabies

Infecting every sane thought with jolts of clarity

Until every single thought new or old is sent along the neural pathways to be rationalized by the part of me that isn't rational at all, but is just as crazy as I am

So,

as I wander in this mass confusion of insanity that is I & me

and we agree

That no matter what order you put us in,

chaos will ensue.

 

Reviews

[Cory Barrett]

tiny script hurts my face

[Chris Micha]

I don't know why it's like that. I enlarged it. Thanks! :)

[Pryde Foltz]

So,
as I wander in this mass confusion of insanity that is I & me
and we agree
That no matter what order you put us in,
chaos will ensue.

There is a school of thought that we are all a little insane until we wake up to who we really are … which usually takes dying … so one may be crazy, but one is also alive. There's that:) A very intelligent and complex write you have here.

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you so much, Pryde. Wonderful to hear such things from you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, i like this...confusion is my middle name, so i relate to this...and the words here describe that feeling quite well.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my good friend :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

I thinks this poem is great even though it is something completely different from what you usually post. I love it!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Crystal

[NoelHC]

This is quite a departure from the poems you usually publish here, but I enjoyed this as well, it is good to try expressing all aspects of ourselves in writing. Well done.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear friend :)

[Lyn Anderson]

An interesting read. A lot of jumbled thoughts coherently discombobulated lol -- I wonder if wonder could be wander -- just a thought.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much, KL. I went with wander :)

[Girl With A Pen]

Very good poem :) Your word choice is astounding!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much :)

[Pure Innocence]

What a thoughtful and great poem! I love it! Just a side note, you might want to put it in a different font because it is a little small and hard to read. Other than that really fantastic poetry! I love your writing, thank you for sharing.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much! :)