I & Me

I love being me.

I & Me

 

 

I wander amongst this mass confusion inside my head

Looking at all the chaotic instabilities

of backward thought, broken coherencies, and jumbled allusions

I ponder what order would be like in a lawless land

of straight lines tied to unified thinking

Where the Thought Police usher about blossoming ideas

into their sorted disillusioned bins and quagmire holding tanks

As the insane asylum tends to the drooling masses of unstable insanity stuffed in an overcrowded ward 

Allowing some to escape over the line of sanity's invisible marked territory

Where they mingle and breed like rabbits with rabies

Infecting every sane thought with jolts of clarity

Until every single thought new or old is sent along the neural pathways to be rationalized by the part of me that isn't rational at all, but is just as crazy as I am

So,

as I wander in this mass confusion of insanity that is I & me

and we agree

That no matter what order you put us in,

chaos will ensue.

 

Reviews

[Fenix Flight]

NIcely put, Nicely written. love this.

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you so much, Fenix :)

[John Ryan]

i really like this piece

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, John! :)

[Tate Morgan]

I will be round to review this

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my friend :)

[Rosi S. Phillips]

Goodness you have talent. Wonderful piece again!

[Chris Micha]

Awe you are just too sweet, Rosi :)

[ReneeJ]

I love your work and Im sure I will always do. You just have so much power with words. The only problem was that the font was a little hard for me to read. Overall, great!

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[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Renee, I will check that out for sure! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I agree with this one, hehe, one minute we're on top of the maintain the next we're tumbling down it. Very creative write, love the poem. :-) You have unique talent!

Kaze~ :-)

[Chris Micha]

Awe Kaze, thank you so much! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[kublakhan27]

Order and chaos become increasingly difficult to distinguish when filtered through your poetry...I love the spins you've put on various observations, and the ending really knocked it out of the park...great work :)

[Chris Micha]

Haha man you made my day. Thank you so much! :)

[Dancing_Elixir]

As chaotic as your thoughts sound to you, for some reason they make sense to me.

[Chris Micha]

Ha well you outta know

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the poem. Chaos and confusion. We think we are okay and than we figure out. We are up a creek with no paddle. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Chris Micha]

The font is huge on my end. Can someone tell me if it is bigger now?