What If...

What If...

 

 

What if...

You & I...

Existed in the collective thoughts of fate

Spinning aimlessly around in our cocoons

Until we collided to birth into a beautiful disaster of infinite parallels

 

What if...

You & I... 

Were the cortex that held together time

While being sheathed by the fabric of forever

Would we collapse time and trust in forever?

 

What if...

You & I...

Could be the endless possibilities of everything

Where everything led us to the creation of endless possibilities

Where we would be the exception to all the things that are not possible

 

But...

What if...

You & I...

Just simply belong together

The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality

And we just simply loved beyond all of the "What if's...."

 

Would that be so bad?

 

 

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

What if...
You & I...
Just simply belong together
The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality
And we just simply loved beyond all of the "What if's...."

Yes, please!! Ugh, this is exquisite! I cannot even describe the power behind this poem. "What if" indeed. But the unknowns in life are the true adventures. Same goes for the love you have expressed here. We never know, so love is the greatest adventure every person embarks on.

What if love did not sustain our every need?
I think life would have no meaning.

Well, I went on a personal tangent there and I'm not sure if you'll follow or care to try to make sense of the mess in my mind. BUT, this was a great and thoughtful write. Beautiful. :)

[Rosi S. Phillips]

This is my favorite poem of yours to date. Wonderful. Simply... wonderful

[Chris Micha]

Wow Rosi, that is so wonderful to hear. Thank you doll :)

[ReneeJ]

The title made me jump in right away because we ask this question everyday. You did not disappoint and I think it so marvellous that you make people (well me) so excited to read and be captured by your words

[Chris Micha]

Awe Renee, thank you so much dear :)

[Honey-Bee]

What if...I like the way the poem starts with and revolves around these two words. And the way it ends...And we just simply loved beyond all of the What if's...Wonderful!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Honey

[Dancing_Elixir]

“Contrariwise,' continued Tweedledee, 'if it was so, it might be; and if it were so, it would be; but as it isn't, it ain't. That's logic.” ~ Lewis Carroll

See you through the looking glass..

[Chris Micha]

OOOOH you! You would quote one of my favorite books ever and I will be waiting through the looking glass!

[Dancing_Elixir]

this can't be one of your favorite books.. It's mine.. And I don't share. Sorry Bae

[Chris Micha]

Not even if we are one? :(

[Dancing_Elixir]

Then I guess we can make an exception... maybe

[OrangeSlice]

I love this poem the would that be so bad part doesn't even need to be there. But this poem is flawless and beautifully written capturing all the what ifs of love all the possibilities

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Orangeslice :)

[Pryde Foltz]

What if...
You & I...
Were the cortex that held together time
While being sheathed by the fabric of forever
Would we collapse time and trust in forever?

Another really complex and impressive write. I believe you wrote this for a member of the fairer sex … but I can't help think … I know this guy. lol.

[Chris Micha]

Well thank you so much, Pryde. You sure know how to make me blush! :)

[Pryde Foltz]

No need to blush; the poem is superb.

[Emily]

I love the meaning and wording of it!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Emily :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

What if...
My Romantic Poet decided to write a steamy piece laced with his natural romantic self.
This would surely make me heart melt.
For my mind is still wrapped around Candyland,
Because it made me envision the perfect man.
=)

I loved the format, flow, meaning and especial the ending of this piece!

[Chris Micha]

I am the perfect man (inside my head) lol. Thank you my sweet friend. I can always count on you and I am thankful for that! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yeah, I think we're all perfect in our own mind. However I know I'm crazy lol...
But I must admit I'm kind of hoping for a Candyland part 2. A girl can dream *sigh*

You're welcome sweetie :)

[Chris Micha]

Soon ;)....

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yay :)....

[Pure Innocence]

What if...
You & I...
Were the cortex that held together time
While being sheathed by the fabric of forever
Would we collapse time and trust in forever?

My favorite stanza!
This was such a sweet and simple poem that held so much in it. The hope and reality that your love holds so much. So love away and let it be free amongst your wordless galaxy. Amazing writing great job!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Pure. I am truly honored by your wonderful review! :)