What If...

What If...

 

 

What if...

You & I...

Existed in the collective thoughts of fate

Spinning aimlessly around in our cocoons

Until we collided to birth into a beautiful disaster of infinite parallels

 

What if...

You & I... 

Were the cortex that held together time

While being sheathed by the fabric of forever

Would we collapse time and trust in forever?

 

What if...

You & I...

Could be the endless possibilities of everything

Where everything led us to the creation of endless possibilities

Where we would be the exception to all the things that are not possible

 

But...

What if...

You & I...

Just simply belong together

The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality

And we just simply loved beyond all of the "What if's...."

 

Would that be so bad?

 

 

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

What if...
You & I...
Just simply belong together
The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality
And we just simply loved beyond all of the "What if's...."

Yes, please!! Ugh, this is exquisite! I cannot even describe the power behind this poem. "What if" indeed. But the unknowns in life are the true adventures. Same goes for the love you have expressed here. We never know, so love is the greatest adventure every person embarks on.

What if love did not sustain our every need?
I think life would have no meaning.

Well, I went on a personal tangent there and I'm not sure if you'll follow or care to try to make sense of the mess in my mind. BUT, this was a great and thoughtful write. Beautiful. :)

[Insatiable Writer]

This is so beautifully written, truly captivates the feelings that one gets, the uncertainty, the longing, the hopeful wishes. I can't wait to read more of your poems!

[EGabriellS]

What a wonderful piece. I enjoyed reading this and I and I love the message that is given in it. "But...What if...You & I...Just simply belong together. The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality. And we just simply loved beyond all of the 'What if's..." Would that be so bad?" Absolutely beautiful.

[Estefania G. Estrada]

Nicely writen. I could hear this in a different voice softly spoken.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Oh, this poem was amazing. I loved reading this piece.

Kaze~

[Mirra]

I just wonder how you can pull out such a very strong poem. The words are simple and you like played with it and voila this is the result. Such a poem can only be written by someone masters emotions, this is a new favorite!

[sona]

First of all the title of the poem brought me here.
What if ....
generally it stays at the back of people's mind
but wow you the poem's awesome .. I really loved the last stanza.. nice work

[Oyindamola Shoola]

honestly speaking...I felt drawn into the poem...so romantic
I love this poem soooooooo much...thanks for sharing

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Transcendent! This is a poem of beauty, yearning and wonder on so many levels...
I really can't find the words to describe how deeply it affects me.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Difficult to interpret with multiple possibilities

This could be about a relationship through evolution

"What if...
You & I...
Existed in the collective thoughts of fate
Spinning aimlessly around in our cocoons
Until we collided to birth into a beautiful disaster of infinite parallels"

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, SquinklaPsyOps :)