Sleeping Thoughts of You

Where do our thoughts sleep?

Sleeping Thoughts of You

 

 

Sleep on my thoughts tonight

On a pillow of granite intimacy

Covered in a warm blanket of electro-euphoria

That powers your wildest dreams of intricacies

 

Mesmerize me - spinning a shiny heart

Made of soul matter and star light wisps

Throw around a sleepy sunset

So it may awaken a fallen spirit's drift

 

Whisper a song on a soft gentle breeze

Delivered with attached angel wings

Let it roll down the spine of my soul

Delivering tingling elements of everything

 

Settle down on this cob-webbed homestead

And be the shepherd of my runaway mind

I'll clean every nook and cranny

With the cleansing love that you provide

 

Paint the night sky with me

With our naked eyes in wonderment of infusions

We'll take down each individual tile

And create unison within a chaotic world of illusions

 

I want you to stay with me

Let your voice become the solacing silence of reformed blues

In a place laced in endless dreams

Where my thoughts sleep on thoughts of you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[MsJewel]

There is a softness to your words that I find endearing. The images you have created are lovely...
I want you to stay with me
Let your voice become the solacing silence of reformed blues
In a place laced in endless dreams
Where my thoughts sleep on thoughts of you.

endless dreams of the one you love - absolutely stunning!

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Julie, thank you so much for your amazing review. I'm completely honored! :)

[Purbleazaleya]

This was so gentle and soothing! It also creates a soft, light feel that just makes the reader feel so touched. It also gives out a very nice imagery in the reader's mind which just grabs the reader and captures the senses, this was truly amazing.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Purble :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I enjoyed the gentleness of your words in this poem. So soothing... Great poem!
-QuanaWana

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Shaquana

[Chris Micha]

This sounds like true love, and it's beautifully woven by your precious ink my friend. You have a way with words, and your talent shines through. Every piece I've read of you, in my holidays, is from the heart, and I like that. Keep on shining, and loving the one you love. I enjoyed the tenderness, and the beautiful images here. :)

- Elisa

[Chris Micha]

Thank you once again my wonderful friend! I am truly honored, Elisa :)

The pleasure is all mine! Keep on writing, you have a talent...

[Sasha]

"Paint the night sky with me
With our naked eyes in wonderment of infusions
We'll take down each individual tile
And create unison within a chaotic world of illusions"

Absolutely amazing !!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Sasha :)

[Madalyn Beck]

I read this last night as I was falling asleep and thought it best not to give a heavy lidded review. Reading it again this morning though, I see I was not disappointed in the least.

This by far, is one of my favorite writes by you. The light tone, the beautiful imagery, and your heart shines brilliantly with the love you hold.

"Sleep on thoughts of you", indeed. I find anyone can relate to this. For me, it touched my soul with a delicate kiss and whispers of love. This is going into my favorites. Brilliant work, Christian! :)

[Chris Micha]

Awe you are amazing, Mads! Thank you so much for your continued support my fellow writer and wonderful amazing friend! :)

[Fenix Flight]

You have done it once again. taken my breath waay. With ever new poem you never cease to amaze me. I love this. its so gentle yet powerful all at once. Thank you for sharing :-D!!!!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Fenix. I'm honored! :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Wow, Chrisitan....This is so romantic and sensational. I love the stellar references. Beautiful.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you soooo much, ma'am! So sweet :)

[NoelHC]

Another excellent work Christian, great images and emotions, well expressed.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my wonderful friend :)

[Latifa]

wow, really well crafted and just beautiful.
I absolutely love the choice of words and the description is amazing
Sleep on my thoughts tonight
On a pillow of granite intimacy
Covered in a warm blanket of electro-euphoria
That powers your wildest dreams of intricacies
the opening lines are brilliant.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Latifa. You're a wonderful friend. :)

[Latifa]

you're very welcome

[Chris Micha]

Beautifully intricate! It's wonderful to get lost in the seduction of words....