Sleeping Thoughts of You

Where do our thoughts sleep?

Sleeping Thoughts of You

 

 

Sleep on my thoughts tonight

On a pillow of granite intimacy

Covered in a warm blanket of electro-euphoria

That powers your wildest dreams of intricacies

 

Mesmerize me - spinning a shiny heart

Made of soul matter and star light wisps

Throw around a sleepy sunset

So it may awaken a fallen spirit's drift

 

Whisper a song on a soft gentle breeze

Delivered with attached angel wings

Let it roll down the spine of my soul

Delivering tingling elements of everything

 

Settle down on this cob-webbed homestead

And be the shepherd of my runaway mind

I'll clean every nook and cranny

With the cleansing love that you provide

 

Paint the night sky with me

With our naked eyes in wonderment of infusions

We'll take down each individual tile

And create unison within a chaotic world of illusions

 

I want you to stay with me

Let your voice become the solacing silence of reformed blues

In a place laced in endless dreams

Where my thoughts sleep on thoughts of you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[MsJewel]

There is a softness to your words that I find endearing. The images you have created are lovely...
I want you to stay with me
Let your voice become the solacing silence of reformed blues
In a place laced in endless dreams
Where my thoughts sleep on thoughts of you.

endless dreams of the one you love - absolutely stunning!

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Julie, thank you so much for your amazing review. I'm completely honored! :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

I am not even eligible to review this. This is a poem of a very high order. Speechless and "hopeful" to crown some of your abilities in me. You are pure genius. :D

[Chris Micha]

Parimal, you are more than eligible, sir. I am honored you have graced me with your kind review and I wish you a great day. :)

[writeupfront]

Almost a hit. I didn't connect the 'We'll take down each individual tile and painting the sky.'

[Chris Micha]

Paint the sky in my mind. Taking each tile down to paint them in unison. Thank you for your review.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Excellent usage of words,.. paints a vivid picture of imagination,amalgated with a lyrical flow.. Nice piece ;)

~Sophy

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Sophy :)

[Lilly]

A beautifully written poem. Captivating from start to finish, but these lines in particular jumped out at me: "Settle down on this cob-webbed homestead
And be the shepherd of my runaway mind"
Lovely work

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Lilly :)

[Lilly]

No worries :)

[Aarea]

Wow, I read the first stanza and though, Oh, this is going to be good. Amazing word choice, you create such a mysterious, wonderful picture with a good idea that makes the reader wonder and sigh. That first line is enough to utterly captivate, Nice work, Christian.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Aarea :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

I love your poems!!! They are so beautiful!!!! Great Work!!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Crystal :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

Beautifully written. You could make a book of poetry. you're very good.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Taylor :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Very well expressed! This really uses language to convey a stream of thought. An thought-provoking piece!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Susan :)

[Brook]

"Throw around a sleepy sunset

So it may awaken a fallen spirit's drift"
I like the line above, it just like is very captivating. I like the poem too, good job.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Brook :)

[Sugandha]

It's beautifully crafted. Congratulations. For bringing alive the thoughts so splendidly :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Sugandha :)