Bed of Wild Yonder

When thoughts of possibilities take you on a journey.

Bed of Wild Yonder

 

 

Tonight

I journey alone

In a bed of wild yonder

Setting sail on wavy Navy blue sheets

That swiftly drag me under

 

The falling images of stars

Cover my hand as it reaches for you

through the cosmos of my mind

Causing collisions of possibilities

To create desire in the future of time

 

In a dark-deep undiscovered cavern

An enchanting beast dances in love licked flames

Her heart covered in icy disappointments

Its beacon signals out to me to be saved

 

A bridge connects all these together

A lock on each end guards its crossing

Her and I, each hold a key

As we both stand there nervously watching

 

Lost in the reality of our dreams

We both turn the locks in anticipation

Releasing the connecting wormhole

Bridging the gap for loves creation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Lost in the reality of our dreams
We both turn the locks in anticipation
Releasing the connecting wormhole
Bridging the gap for loves creation.

Well … you do know how to swing a pen. To bring romantic love to the ethereal and divine, first takes a solo dive in it, I believe. Wonderful, wonderful write.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I am always honored by you, Pryde! :)

[NoelHC]

Another romantic write by you, full of longing and desire. I enjoyed this one, and the images it made for me a great deal.
In the line "Beacons out to me to be saved" did you mean to say "Beckons" as in "Calls out to me to be saved"
Not sure if I am right or not, but beckons would make more sense on that line.
Any way, whatever, this is good.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks my good friend! I wrestled with that and I couldn't decide. I will go back and look. :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

Love it!!! the imagery is great. I love the description of this poem!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Crystal :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"wavy navy blue sheets" that is such a cool image...

dreams are so different than reality...and anticipation can get our hopes up, and then we find disappointment...

[Chris Micha]

Wow..thank you so much, Jacob. I really appreciate you dear friend. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"we both stand there nervously watching

Lost in the reality of our dreams
We both turn the locks in anticipation''

I do agree dear poet. Anticipations of the unknown make us nervous, disappointments make us jittery and wild journeys make us thunder over yonder. All in the collision of possibilities...Bravo for you connecting...:)..........

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my amazing friend. So happy for you to grace my work!!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)............