Bed of Wild Yonder

When thoughts of possibilities take you on a journey.

Bed of Wild Yonder

 

 

Tonight

I journey alone

In a bed of wild yonder

Setting sail on wavy Navy blue sheets

That swiftly drag me under

 

The falling images of stars

Cover my hand as it reaches for you

through the cosmos of my mind

Causing collisions of possibilities

To create desire in the future of time

 

In a dark-deep undiscovered cavern

An enchanting beast dances in love licked flames

Her heart covered in icy disappointments

Its beacon signals out to me to be saved

 

A bridge connects all these together

A lock on each end guards its crossing

Her and I, each hold a key

As we both stand there nervously watching

 

Lost in the reality of our dreams

We both turn the locks in anticipation

Releasing the connecting wormhole

Bridging the gap for loves creation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Lost in the reality of our dreams
We both turn the locks in anticipation
Releasing the connecting wormhole
Bridging the gap for loves creation.

Well … you do know how to swing a pen. To bring romantic love to the ethereal and divine, first takes a solo dive in it, I believe. Wonderful, wonderful write.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I am always honored by you, Pryde! :)

[sakshi arora]

The falling images of stars
Cover my hand as it reaches for you
through the cosmos of my mind
Causing collisions of possibilities
To create desire in the future of time
just wow :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This is so passionate, romantic, sensual and sweet. Very nice to read you again and to find your writing to be so full and embracing. Best to you!

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Very well rendered and expressed! Well done

[MsJewel]

Lost in the reality of our dreams
We both turn the locks in anticipation
Releasing the connecting wormhole
Bridging the gap for loves creation.

Beautifully soft and romantic. A stunning poem Christian
:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you my dear friend :)

[MsJewel]

My pleasure

[Dancing_Elixir]

A bridge connects all these together
A lock on each end guards its crossing
Her and I, each hold a key
As we both stand there nervously watching

..... Waiting for each other to make the a definitive move?

Perfect.

[Chris Micha]

A move will come and the world will never be the same :)

[Purbleazaleya]

This had a mysterious touch to it! This is a poem that makes up think, and spurs to mind to imagine and wonder. Great poem with an excellent choice of words!

[Chris Micha]

Wow thank you so much, Purble :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

Her heart covered in icy disappointments
Its beacon signals out to me to be saved

This is so beautiful.

[Chris Micha]

Brittany, thank you so much sweet friend! :)

[OrangeSlice]

I love the keys and lock great imagery :-)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Orangeslice

[willweb]

This was very good Christian. I enjoyed the photo this moved in my mind.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Will :)