New Mexico Skies

Trying not to let the sun set for good.

 

New Mexico Skies

 

As the sun sets over New Mexico

So goes my heart into its night skies

Her mind is even farther gone than her body

That was set adrift on a hotel bed of lies

 

Thorns cover her heart now

To keep a so called "player" out

Yet his heart beats stronger for her than any other

Longing for her love like a Chihuahuan Desert drought

 

And it's dying

Parched from the lack of her affection

Lost wandering hot sands of time

Praying that she will finally give him some direction

 

So,

Let the rains come

Showering over his emotional pores

Letting his soul bloom

Into the skies where the Prairie Falcon soars.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mirra]

Another heartfelt romantic poem :-) And I like it because I think it's uniquely fresh and warm ^_^

[Luna Zerimar]

I've always found your poems romantic.

And they're always good. Amazing.

Just another amazing, romantic poem.

You're amazing. Always.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

A lovely pastiche of images so delightfully drawn. Super job

[FancyMee]

Your words are amazing!!!!

[Emily]

I like it! It's my favorite one of yours!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Emily :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

This is bleeding with so much emotion of pain and love.

"Thorns cover her heart now."

This is such a sad line...
A sad piece from you this time but overall it was really nice.

[Chris Micha]

Hey now, can't a guy me emotional and sappy lol. I think my writing will start to take a brighter sexier route pretty soon. :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yes, you have every right to get a little sappy now and again. I won't hold it against you :)
But remember I'm the hopeless romantic that enjoys the happy endings lol.

I'll be waiting for that brighter sexier route :)

[Chris Micha]

YOU are the erotic romantic ;)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You may not consider yourself to be an erotic romantic but I think you are :)

[Chris Micha]

mmmmmmm :)~

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Don't be shy, tap into your erotic side lol

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

Ive never been to new mexico but this definitely makes me want to :)

If you have time please review my Chapter one for Ash to Ash. I really need good advice on it.

[Chris Micha]

Awe, thank you so much, Taylor. I will get to reading your work. :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

No problem :D and thank you :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow. The imagery is vivid and fantastic. The pain, love, and desire are embedded into the words you have penned. I can feel the longing and the heartache. Brilliant job expressing yourself! :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my dear friend. I am so happy to get your wonderful review!

[Purbleazaleya]

This poem evokes a very vivid image in the reader's mind and really draws them in. Good job on this one :-)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Purble :)