BIG BANG

This is how the Big Bang happened.

BIG BANG

 

 

 

I will turn the universe inside out for you

We can play with it like Play Doh

Toss it around and around as we go

Splashes & dashes of psychedelics

Twisted rainbows distorted

In colored fluorescent scented tasteful

Morsels dropped in infinity's

Paint buckets back pocket

Stored as we do fly byes

A little here a little there

Slinging like we don't care

Creating beautiful chaotic confusion

Laughing at the time we are having

I can feel electronic blue hues

Burning holes in my brain

Just glancing at you blew me away

I'm on fire...I'm lit

Passion ignited

Kudos

To you

Now let's do this

The only way we are going to complete this painting

Is if we light each other on fire

My heart is lit

Are you ready for yours to be?

We'll be splattered on this blank canvas

We will be the galaxies of stars

The planets of revolution

Minds in confusion

We will be the Maker & the Undertaker

Heaven & Hell

Aphrodite & Apollo

Mork & Mindy

Now hold me tight as we suffocate the oxygen between us

We'll meld into one of everything

Now kiss me

We now have ignition

 

3...

2...

1...

 

BOOM

BIG BANG!!!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Moonie]

Wow! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE POEM!!! It is so creative. You have the undinted imagination of a child, mixed with the thoughts of a philosopher, and the creativity of a brilliant poet.
Your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you.

Big Bangs of life accelerate my mind,
helium beams of your love slow it down.
wouldn't it be far better,
if we took control of the sky and the ground.
To twist this milky way in shapes of our emotions
to charm this sky to speak of our devotion
to create a new big bang in
3, 2, 1...

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much for the awesome review :)

[John Ryan]

Very wonderful imagery that you portray here!

very wonderful read!!!!
3...
2...
1...

BOOM
BIG BANG!!!
Very nicely done

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my good friend :)

[Fenix Flight]

I love all the images that this paints in my head!!! Very well written once again perfection!!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you again, Fenix :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Your poem resonated so strongly with me, it's beautifully phrased and clearly stated

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Susan :)

[Pryde Foltz]

The whole romantic love thing can seem to blow things apart for a while. A very artistic and enjoyable write, Christian. Fabulous word choice and conception.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear friend :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Ah, chemistry! It can be quite explosive and you have described it perfectly! I could feel the passion and see the colors light up behind my eyes as I envisioned this beautiful collision! You did a fantastic job with the imagery. The flow was fast paced and anxious making me want to reach the end and see the final BIG BANG.

Fantastic work with this, Christian. I don't think I'll ever grow tired of reading your artistic pens. :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Mads :)

[Purbleazaleya]

I really liked this! This conveyed the awesome feeling we feel when we are with someone who we have chemistry with, that strong attraction to each other. When the chemistry wins and people get together, it can feel like a big bang, a sensation so strong, it turns our world upside down and captured the mind. Good job!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Purble! :)

[Chris Atkinson]

realy good, I enjoyed it, Well writen :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Chris :)

[Enigma]

This is good. I really enjoyed reading it. :D

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Enigma :)