BIG BANG

This is how the Big Bang happened.

BIG BANG

 

 

 

I will turn the universe inside out for you

We can play with it like Play Doh

Toss it around and around as we go

Splashes & dashes of psychedelics

Twisted rainbows distorted

In colored fluorescent scented tasteful

Morsels dropped in infinity's

Paint buckets back pocket

Stored as we do fly byes

A little here a little there

Slinging like we don't care

Creating beautiful chaotic confusion

Laughing at the time we are having

I can feel electronic blue hues

Burning holes in my brain

Just glancing at you blew me away

I'm on fire...I'm lit

Passion ignited

Kudos

To you

Now let's do this

The only way we are going to complete this painting

Is if we light each other on fire

My heart is lit

Are you ready for yours to be?

We'll be splattered on this blank canvas

We will be the galaxies of stars

The planets of revolution

Minds in confusion

We will be the Maker & the Undertaker

Heaven & Hell

Aphrodite & Apollo

Mork & Mindy

Now hold me tight as we suffocate the oxygen between us

We'll meld into one of everything

Now kiss me

We now have ignition

 

3...

2...

1...

 

BOOM

BIG BANG!!!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Moonie]

Wow! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE POEM!!! It is so creative. You have the undinted imagination of a child, mixed with the thoughts of a philosopher, and the creativity of a brilliant poet.
Your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you.

Big Bangs of life accelerate my mind,
helium beams of your love slow it down.
wouldn't it be far better,
if we took control of the sky and the ground.
To twist this milky way in shapes of our emotions
to charm this sky to speak of our devotion
to create a new big bang in
3, 2, 1...

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much for the awesome review :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Speechless.

You. You have a fabulous imagination.

You used colors and movements to show your emotions, and your thoughts. Your words made everything flow.

I love how you put Mork & Mindy. I'm a fan. (:

One thing, I felt like "I can feel electronic blue hues" should've been repeated. At least twice.

But, I loved the poem. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

[FancyMee]

This is beautiful, i love the way that you speak with love

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Fancy :)

[Honey-Bee]

Cool! I love this. I was so nice to imagine the universe as you playground for painting and exploring. I Wonderful adventure in this poem!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Honey :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

This freakin piece is a big bang!
I can picture you reciting this piece at a spoken word club or something, with people applauding.

I love, love, love this. It was happy, sweet, cool, romantic...
It has me smiling :)

[Chris Micha]

LOL...thank you my dearest friend and for making me smile today :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Well you made me smile first so I thought I would return the favor :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

As a fellow science nerd I loved that you put the big bang and love together into one piece and even added art. this is a perfect piece, thank you for sharing :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Taylor :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

You are very welcome

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in this well written poem. I love the last few lines. A great verse!

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my friend! I appreciate you, Julie. :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

It is awesome. I love it, and it is very creative. You are a great writer!!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you, Crystal

[NoelHC]

This is a departure from the work I normally see from you, different in format or style or something I can't quite decide on, but still well written and interesting.

[Chris Micha]

My mind has been so fried the past few days lol. I think I just needed a break from the norm. Thanks bud! :)