Hate To Love Me

Title says it all.

 

Hate To Love Me

 

I could really use a pick me up

Like a cold breeze off an Icelandic shore

Kiss me and relieve this pain

Give me a shot of your elixir of Novocain

Set me free to be happy again

But hold me and keep me grounded

No one can cure this heart of mine

But you.

 

And you can

 

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L

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             Me

 

Dancing_Elixir

 

But love me any way you know how.

 

I woke up alone this morning

With tears on Crimson pillows

I lost your heart yesterday

And my grandmother's heart to Heaven today

I can still hear each one beat next to me

But I can't hear my own

My eyes burn of sulfur

As Life escapes through the portals of Hell

Heal me with your voice of reason

With

That laugh I love

That heart I love

Feed Heaven back into me with those sky blues

and release me back into you.

 

And you can

 

H

   a

     t

       e

 

          To

 

L

   o

     v

        e

 

            Me

 

But love me any way you know how.

 

Dancing_Elixir

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Alas, far too many of us are looking for ourselves in romantic and sexual adventures … or perhaps misadventures might be the optimum word use here;) As human beings we are stuck with duality … man owes woman and woman owes man our very existence. We are all infinitely flawed and as such showing each other as much compassion as possible is the only medicine to ease the suffering our flaws may bring. Apologize when you can; be a cause for a positive change, and forgive, starting with yourself. Like all storms, this will pass. The write is great by the way.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you dear friend :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Wow.

That's all I can say.

[Oyindamola Shoola]

I love this poem...no matter how much 'you hate to love me' the most romantic love will forever remain the love you can give yourself...to love loving yourself is the best romance....well penned

[ReneeJ]

You people inspire me! very beautiful piece

[Chris Micha]

Renee, thank you again doll :)

[Mirra]

"I lost your heart yesterday

And my grandmother's heart to Heaven today

I can still hear each one beat next to me

But I can't hear my own"

Sometimes pain can also be an anesthesia, when it aches like hell it hurts no more. Another favorite! You really are an excellent writer and your works are just brilliant!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my sweet friend :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

I agree 100% with Pryde Foltz. She said it perfectly :)

[NoelHC]

Well done, shows your emotions very well, and the formatting is interesting. A good write.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my good friend. I really appreciate your words!! :)

[Honey-Bee]

This is a sad but lovely poem! It is a heartfelt and well written poem! L ove the format!

[Chris Micha]

Sad, but filled with hope. Thank you, Honey-Bee!

[John Ryan]

the format of the words
H
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To

L
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v
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Me

remind me of song lyrics

check out the song bleed to love her by fleetwood mac
it reminds me of this

[Chris Micha]

I LOVE those lyrics, John! I had never read them before and I am a huge fan of lyrics. Thank you!!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Heal me with your voice of reason
With
That laugh I love
That heart I love
Feed Heaven back into me with those sky blues
and release me back into you.

So much emotion. The pain is so real in this piece :'(

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Nat. Good to see you around, again! :)